All Comments on 'Mira Ch. 13'

did she really just talk herself into suicide?!? WOW I definitely did not see that coming. you think of the craziest things. cause erybody know when R. gets back that chile gone be dead. but wow i can't believe she did that and it was so sweet of him to give her the whistle and the pin that was too cute. love it. I'm glad i checked tonight cause i sure enough bout to go to bed. can't wait to see what happens next

I still have little sympathy for her though. Right now I'm completely focused on the happy ending for Mira and Rillan! Thanks for updating so quickly. Looking forward to Chapter 14.

I absolutely love this story. Thank you for posting so quickly. :)

Damn. I didnt even see this coming with Aris. Just wow. I just thought he would have drained her, like all the times before, and leave them at the mouth of the cave...

But, i swear when Lilth had recieved the gift from Rillan, i actually had a tear in my eye! hahaha.

PLEASE you must get Lilth and Rillan together again...BEFORE THE WEDDING/HANDFASTING. lol

You did a very very very good job with this. Please continue :)

Of course, you could have just left Aris to die, drained of blood but she gets her own half of Chapter 13, which either means you're just writing about Aris to make up for a short chapter or she's going to play a part in your story.

More please :) PJ xx

Is this your way of getting rid of Aris so Mira can go back to Rillan? hehe I hope so, it seems fitting for her as awful as it sounds but then again this is erotic horror hehe

Love your story!

Where is the action, the exictement that "Leader" is famous for?

What do you propose? Pitchforks and pails as swords and shields?

You have been missed for many years. I hope the published works are keeping you busy.

Wow, what a great chapter! your Aris character is very effective

Keep writing!!!!

Ok so I know that the author and those that previously commented won't ever see this but I'm going to vent anyways. What a bunch of heartless bloodthirsty bitches! Seriously? Not one ounce of compassion for Aris? Sorry but I'm hoping good ole Rillan ends up a pile of ash! How many women guilty of nothing more than trying to keep his monstrous ass alive has he killed? Of course the asshat is lonely! He's about as lovable as a rabid wolf! It's just ludicrous what some women will romanticize. If Hitler had a magic dick they'd all be lining up!