- All
Comments (10) - Add a
Comment - Send
Feedback Send private anonymous feedback to the author (click here to post a public comment instead).
| Literotica Toy Store ADULT TOY & DVD STORE FAST & DISCREET |
Literotica XXX Webcams 24/7 LIVE CAMS - FREE PREVIEW W/AUDIO! |
Literotica Adult Movies STREAMING ADULT MOVIES PAY PER MINUTE |
English
lol
did she really just talk herself into suicide?!? WOW I definitely did not see that coming. you think of the craziest things. cause erybody know when R. gets back that chile gone be dead. but wow i can't believe she did that and it was so sweet of him to give her the whistle and the pin that was too cute. love it. I'm glad i checked tonight cause i sure enough bout to go to bed. can't wait to see what happens next
Interesting situation with Aris.
I still have little sympathy for her though. Right now I'm completely focused on the happy ending for Mira and Rillan! Thanks for updating so quickly. Looking forward to Chapter 14.
Can't wait for the next chapters!
I absolutely love this story. Thank you for posting so quickly. :)
OMG
Damn. I didnt even see this coming with Aris. Just wow. I just thought he would have drained her, like all the times before, and leave them at the mouth of the cave...
But, i swear when Lilth had recieved the gift from Rillan, i actually had a tear in my eye! hahaha.
PLEASE you must get Lilth and Rillan together again...BEFORE THE WEDDING/HANDFASTING. lol
You did a very very very good job with this. Please continue :)
I feel an important character brewing...
Of course, you could have just left Aris to die, drained of blood but she gets her own half of Chapter 13, which either means you're just writing about Aris to make up for a short chapter or she's going to play a part in your story.
Great
More please :) PJ xx
Ooooo
Is this your way of getting rid of Aris so Mira can go back to Rillan? hehe I hope so, it seems fitting for her as awful as it sounds but then again this is erotic horror hehe
Love your story!
The battle was a disappointment
Where is the action, the exictement that "Leader" is famous for?
I love this line! You are a very unique author.
What do you propose? Pitchforks and pails as swords and shields?
You have been missed for many years. I hope the published works are keeping you busy.
Vivid ending
Wow, what a great chapter! your Aris character is very effective
Keep writing!!!!
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Mira Ch. 13 or
More submissions by secretme.