Dude I am normally not critical and i always appreciate a story but i have one thing to suggest to you. Dude you need serious professional help. Go see a shrink before its too late
I found the story humorous, filled with a tongue in cheek sort of play. It had me laughing. Of course, the story is ridiculous, nevertheless it was worth the few minutes reading it.
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you need help
Dude I am normally not critical and i always appreciate a story but i have one thing to suggest to you. Dude you need serious professional help. Go see a shrink before its too late
Ghostly pleasing
I found the story humorous, filled with a tongue in cheek sort of play. It had me laughing. Of course, the story is ridiculous, nevertheless it was worth the few minutes reading it.
Poorly Written
This was not well thought out and it shows.
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