"Twould be so grand to feel such passion so strong." I read that somewhere, in a story about love at first sight, and this story reminded me of that line.
Very well done Ms. Widder, your velvet touch to the story is very apparent.Thanks for your heart warming story...Rich
I love the word used in one of the previous comments. This was lusty. It was fun, flirty, sexy, and seductive. That's what you did. You seduced the reader with your words. In a very short time, I've come to want these two to find happiness with each other. Bravo!
English
Living up to expectations
This lady can write with conviction. Everything gels nicely. The sex was good and lusty. I wonder what happened next?
Love at first sight?
"Twould be so grand to feel such passion so strong." I read that somewhere, in a story about love at first sight, and this story reminded me of that line.
Very well done Ms. Widder, your velvet touch to the story is very apparent.Thanks for your heart warming story...Rich
So well written...
I love the word used in one of the previous comments. This was lusty. It was fun, flirty, sexy, and seductive. That's what you did. You seduced the reader with your words. In a very short time, I've come to want these two to find happiness with each other. Bravo!
Spontenous sex
leading to love. Nice read.
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