All Comments on 'Unwanted Visitors'

Fucking a person senseless and letting sex overtake their minds doesnt change rape from being rape. Once stated no, all acts after that are rape. To bad her home doesnt have an internal security camera system. Would make loverly evidence later. ANd one must always remember the Stockholm Syndrome doesnt make it any less rape.

The last commenter needs to know that it's fantasy, and that if rape fantasies bother them that they shouldn't read it.

Decent story, would like to read more.

Can't wait to read more, and as a woman I found it to be extremely erotic. I love this catagory and think that you write it well.

its hard as a woman to find a decent story that keeps u interesed but this was fantastic cant wait for the rest

love this first story so very erotic.

Even love the title unwanted visitors.

can't wait to read more.

A turn off that shes 35 and 5'8

I suppose you are a decent writer.

However, I have a difference of opinion on your basic concept.

I'm calling it Non-Consent?

If they break into her apartment to rape her,

where is the conflict if she ends up being willing?

In most stories, there is always some sort of conflict in the plot.

James Bond has amazing tools to overcome everything.

However, something always goes wrong with something?

If you tell a story of coercion, reluctance, rape, and she enjoys it,

where is the conflict.

Perhaps her body goes into an unwilling climax, but her mind is not enjoying it?

On a minor point, being held down, tied, raped is one story.

In my mind, there is more conflict, if she is made to capitulate in some manner?

Perhaps she quits resisting because she is somehow protecting a husband, child, mother or some other person?

Just a few thoughts.