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At the Lake

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by Anonymous10/17/08

An excellent read

An excellent read, funny and interesting. I'm raelly looking forward to more.

I love your writing, thanks.

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by Anonymous10/17/08

V/Good read.

Look forward to more off your stories. Would have liked you to have given us a bit more of this one. Allosaurus

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by Anonymous07/08/16

great story

needs a lot of grarmmatical cleanup, but that doesn't take away from its wonderfulnes

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