All Comments on 'Wait, November'

Good, just not the kind of thing I was expecting.

I have to agree and say this is not what i was expecting. Its not something i think should be on literotica but should definately be published somewhere. your writing was smooth and well done. this was an interesting read and definately deserves to be read but not here neccessarily. good job tho

Thank you each for the comments, critiques and feedback.

Very nicely done. I hope you continue writing. You've got lots of talent.