All Comments on 'The Neighbor Girl'

Great story... well-written... one of the best on this site... thanks for sharing.

Amazing , one of the few stories that I actally believed to have really happened . You told it simply without any exageration and as an older person I could feel your emotions . Do write more like this .

HELLO,

love your story, and i hope there will

be a follow up story. you have a way

with words that make it sound exciting!

good luck.

I know I'll get flamed for this, and I don't care; but what the hell is wrong with picking a tense and staying with it? Past tense, no, present, no, no, past... I got dizzy.<p>Also, what's up with the unquoted dialog?<p>All I'm talking about is attention to writing English. Is that so much to ask?

I loved the ending. That was kind of cute. I do think there should be a sequel or something. Maybe Diane comes back or something.

and so sweet. It all seemed so plausible. Of course I loved the neat ending, which opens the door for another great story. Thanks.

that was a great story, and perhaps

you will write a follow up story.

please do.

xxxxxx

I was beginning to wonder, but then the condom issue came up. It was handled beautifully and your "blanks" status certainly added the needed eroticism to the story. She must have been very horny after that revelation! Now she can fuck her new boyfriend and still fuck you without her being afraid of getting pregnant by a side benefit of your cock once in awhile.

it has been 2 years since you wrote this. when are you

going to finish the story?

Love the build up to an erotic coupling or three. Then you go and introduce a cheerleader. wow

Hope you plan to continue this as a series.

Guys. Guys. Guys.

Calling for a sequel that is already written....well, I don't want to be mean.

The Submissions page of ainu2 shows the second chapter was submitted only 8 days later.

Calls for a sequel without checking the Submissions page, and without checking the ending sidebar "Also in This Series," does not make you look too smart.

Clever 5 star story.

Paul in Oklahoma

*****What a short HOT very entertaining read. Thanks for sharing.