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The Internship: Consequences

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by hr618310/19/08

Enjoy!

I hope you all enjoy my story. I'm not sure if it's as well written as the first part of my story but at least it should bring some closure.

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by Anonymous10/20/08

keep them coming

I DO think this one is as good as the first part of the story. I love the idea of an tougher, stronger, agressive butch taking her pretty femme partner with the strapon. Loved the lift and carry too. I would like to see you describe a love scene where the butch lifts her partner in a standing cowgirl position while doing her with the strapon, and keeps her it that position until they about both pass out! I also wish someone would make your stories into a video, wouldn't that be something! Keep up the good work, I truly enjoy your talent.

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by Anonymous10/21/08

TERRIFIC

REALLY LOVED THIS SEXY STORY AND THE EROTIC TRIBADISM SEX BETWEEN THE TWO WOMEN WAS WELL WRITTEN AND VERY ENJOYABLE,MORE PLEASE.

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by Anonymous10/21/08

Don't stop now!

i loved the story and would love to see you continue it with the growing relationship....i loved the mature butch being dominant yet loving. the sex scenese were well written and overall this is a 10. bye for now, Carol

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by Anonymous10/25/08

Another hot story

I really enjoy your theme of a hot young beauty getting taken forcfully but lovingly by an older butch. Awesome combination of lust tempered by caring, innocent reluctance giving way to accepted desire. Don't see enough of these.
Not sure where you go next with this story, or if this was the end. Suggestions for a new stories using your theme would be flirty hot coed with a schoolgirl crush on her professor, who then calls her on it; or maybe an 18 year old hottie being gently seduced by a long time friend of her mothers. I'll be anticipating your next submission.

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by Anonymous02/19/09

i enjoyed your story

much to my surprise.i consider myself a straight mid forty's female.i want to be the baby doll,is that possible at my age?the repeated 55 reference,kept distracting me,but otherwise this story ran well.thanks.

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by Anonymous05/19/09

very good

As mentioned before, well-written. Very sexy.

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by Anonymous07/31/09

it was beautiful...

it is storys like these that make me realize how much i love butch lesbians and especially bois. i actually cried several times through out this story and its previous one. it reminded me how powerful gay love is for me and how much i still am madly in love with my first crush. it brought back memories on how close i was to having her, she is a boi and remains one of my close friends, its hard to stay friends with someone like her though because it makes me remember the times when she was almost mine.

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by Anonymous04/14/10

great story

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by Anonymous08/09/10

These are so close

to being great stories, but without the younger girl returning the favor it's just not a lesbian story. If one partner completely denies having a pussy, it doesn't seem that different from a straight story.

Otherwise well written, but get a sex change already!

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by Anonymous08/28/10

When is the next part to this one? this is a good series.

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by Anonymous09/24/10

now a 3some or moresome

when are you going to add more charactors to the story like Susan or the Mother or maybe friends or other office employees

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by Anonymous12/31/10

another character would be good

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by Daddys_Plaything05/07/12

Very nice

I love stories that portray a butch the way she's supposed to be, confident, somewhat aggressive and having the knowledge of how to use a strap-on on a femme so she feels completely owned.

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by Bumpkin9208/18/12

Loved it!

Hell I love all of your stories, but this one even more so. Very hot!

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Well, that was...

a hot seduction. Nice dialog, dialog makes or breaks a story for me. And I love to hear the inner conflict transform into acceptance and realization that what they've been resisting is what they deeply desire. Mmmm. Thanks.

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by Anonymous12/29/13

Great followup

I followed the link from the first part. This is even better. Terrific story.

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by Anonymous04/15/14

WOW

sexy sexy stuff.....so sexy

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by Anonymous09/25/15

Hot

I want this so much

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