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by Anonymous10/19/08

horrible

why do you IDIOTS write in the third person??? As a published author and editor of Writers magazine..you NEVER EVER write in third person UNLESS said character is describing an event past

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by lordchilworth10/20/08

thanks

don't pay too much heed to the bumptious arseholes who fill the comment spaces with vitriol and hide behind annonimity... thank you for a good tale well told, there are syntax errors, but that's the same for everyone... thanks again.. don't stop

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by lordchilworth10/20/08

thanks

don't pay too much heed to the bumptious arseholes who fill the comment spaces with vitriol and hide behind annonimity... thank you for a good tale well told, there are syntax errors, but that's the same for everyone... thanks again.. don't stop

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