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Boys dont cry
My father died when I was that age and you wrote that episode well I remember very similar struggles. This chapter was too short. I prefer an author to wait until they are ready rather than rushing out such a short chapter. If the writing is good the readers will wait. I thought that your first chapter started poorly and improved by the end. This was a lot better and very promising for a first time author. Good luck. Thanks. UK CYNIC.
Great Chapter!
Yes this chap. was short but you did warn us, lol. Loving the way you're building this. Don't feel it's being rushed or anything. Looking forward to the next part!
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