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by Anonymous10/21/08

Well written

But very un-satisfying. Neither character came to life. They read as one-dimensional characters. That was often done in old sagas, and perhaps that was your intent. But if you can make your characters leap off the page and come alive, you will be an excellent writer in the modern style. Good luck.

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