well this will be the very hot ever story i had read and love the way it gose .wish this can go with more
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Anonymous10/08/15
Its ok....but
You really need to learn your terminology and pronouns - nothing takes you out of the experience like suddenly switching to male pronouns for a character that identifies as female, and it was really weird and kinda insulting how you referred to Stephan as a woman... this might seem a bit sjw-ey, but I feel that of all places, a story about a romantic transgender encounter should at least have some respect for its characters.
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well this will be the very hot ever story i had read and love the way it gose .wish this can go with more
Its ok....but
You really need to learn your terminology and pronouns - nothing takes you out of the experience like suddenly switching to male pronouns for a character that identifies as female, and it was really weird and kinda insulting how you referred to Stephan as a woman... this might seem a bit sjw-ey, but I feel that of all places, a story about a romantic transgender encounter should at least have some respect for its characters.
great and sexy story did you meet her again and did she take the blind fold off at any time ?
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