All Comments on 'Trans-itioning to a New World'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
hot

well this will be the very hot ever story i had read and love the way it gose .wish this can go with more

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Its ok....but

You really need to learn your terminology and pronouns - nothing takes you out of the experience like suddenly switching to male pronouns for a character that identifies as female, and it was really weird and kinda insulting how you referred to Stephan as a woman... this might seem a bit sjw-ey, but I feel that of all places, a story about a romantic transgender encounter should at least have some respect for its characters.

tarafemtarafemabout 7 years ago

great and sexy story did you meet her again and did she take the blind fold off at any time ?

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