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by will_spike

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
not bad for a first attempt

The only thing that was a bit distracting, was the fact that at times you were difficult to hear. You're so soft-spoken, which is fine, but a slight enunciation could help. Internal content was vivid and the imagery came across well. There were several times where I nodded, impressed by the words you had chosen. Welcome to the fold! Oh, and for the record, your nervousness didn't really show all that much. You are a brave lad - I could never do something like this. Many thanks.

quiet_ny_tech

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Lemme guess, this is Samwell Tarly of House Tarly???? Dammit didnt know he had a literotica account

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Will please stick to your day job

This is not meant for you, seriously

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