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by Anonymous

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by hmmnmm10/23/08

Daylong

multi-tiered effect. One read, two reads, three reads, roll it around, print it, mull, read it again. Understand the feel, not necessarily the explicits, that come clear later in the night. Each time gets better.

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by WickedEve10/23/08

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When I did the reviews earlier, your poem and a few others were absent. :) I like the poem but I kind of need that last rhyme. Or maybe you could make the last two lines a new stanza.

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by lobomao10/24/08

strange co-incedence blue

for you,blue,
I stay till the end credits
despite the double-bill
just to see all the magic
and enjoy the last of my red whips

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