CvsN 14: Road Rules

debbie, not donna

enjoyed the whole series, can't wait for more.. isn't the name debbie? (not donna)

Thanks again!

Another solid addition to the tale. Can't wait for the next one! Somehow I doubt we've heard the last of Aimee!

welcome home party

Wonderful series. Don't know if you welcome suggestions, but have you thought about a kinky twist to a welcome home party? Maybe have a little fetish involved? Anyway, keep up the good work

Been too Long.....

love this series.... simply love it.....
but it has been nearly 5 moths and no continuation :(
been to long .... waiting for more to Cum!!!!!

Gary

Awesome Tale

As I read I dream of being Jack. So looking forward to the next installment. Keep up the good work.

bill

wtf!!!

Kahan mar gaya bhosdike... 6 mahine se lund pakad ke betha hoon... aur likh madarchod...

Great story

I don't know how you can keep your characters straight through all the adventures. I thoroughly enjoyed the story and hope you will continue the CvsN series without too much delay. Lots of possibilities: Boss at work, next trip to Spain, Aimie, sisters ongoing rivalry, Beth going to school, development of the Day Care operation, more Joe and Cathy. The list goes on. Please continue.

Who is Donna?

Who is Donna and what happened to Debbie? Have I missed something and Debbie was eleminated. What a way to treat someone that sensitive to being wronged.

fantastic story!!

great series, i really love it. i hope you decide to continue it. lots of potential there. i hope everything works out with debbie, she has had enough problems in her life. every one else could handle an ending, ie beth leaving to go to college or karen wanting someone permenant, but keep debbie. hell, keep all 3 of them and eliminate all other partners as hot as they are. as you get to the end of ideas you should include a final chapter letting us know how things will end up. will look forward to more in this series!

This is a great story, I hope you haven't walked

This is a great story, I hope you haven't walked away from it or Literotica. While there are issues with Literotica, it is far better than most of the other sites I have tried. I do visit other sites though, just to remind myself why I prefer Literotica.

-- srgeek --

Great series

Great series, hope you aren't tired of these characters,

please continue this story

Ok, I love your plot and wish you were making more chapters quickly. This story has a lot of potential to be a large novel.
However, you need to keep better track of your character's names(I.E. getting Debbie's name changed to Donna in this chapter & Karan's name changed to Nancy in a much earlier chapter).

Donna?

You changed Debbie's name to Donna in this chapter...

love the continental xxx skirt up

A man is a man regardless of the country and Chris was just too ripe with Debbie /Beth a continent away.

Evil

Infidelity is wrong. The scene between the boss who has kids and the protagonist was terrible

EVIL ??

Nothing is evil between two consenting adults enjoying each other we all just wish we could

Thanks for the comments

First, I did screw up with the names a couple of times. I originally used different names, and did a global replace. Screwed up. I'm going to have to go back and fix that.

Second, I do agree somewhat with the comments about the Boss. Purely intentional. Jack does not have a lot of moral character, and needs to do some growing up. He's feeling his oats, and is making bad decisions. You can blame the boss a little, and his home environment a lot more. Let's hope he learns something from this... ;-)

Thanks for all the great comments, and I'm still slowly plugging away at this series.

TTT

Great story!

Thanks for this awesome story!

again a great read

God I love the way things just seem to fall into his lap.

Fuck

Wow what a ridiculously good story. Fuck

Fucking Hot!

I'm usually more into the combinations, the menageries our hero's involved with, but this chapter got to me in a way all you guys out there will recognize. I'm really looking forward to reading the rest of the chapters.

A little off kilter...

...he comes across as just a horny guy, but with scruples, so why did you have his character ignoring his boss's position regarding her need to stay faithful to her hubby, and had him continually push her to allow him to escalate the sex. Almost seems to be a contradiction, especially in light of his continual statements of being serious with his two main ladies.

I gave you a low number why you didn't finish the dam story and went on to do more come back and finish it and you will get a higher score