All Comments on 'Eyewitness to Orgasm'

I liked it a lot. Especially the ending. I didn't note any outstanding grammatical or spelling errors either. The repetition of the "professional note" phrase was wonderful foreshadowing. Keep writing! :)

I enjoyed most of it and of course I liked the surprise ending. Although I did notice outstanding spelling & grammatical errors, I was indeed aroused by the story as a whole.

Maybe you could do other scenarios of them cleaning different types of offices. That would be interesting

Finally. An arousing, interesting, and wonderfully written story. I hope you continue with more!

really good read

A+++

from a retired nurse ;)

Such a clever surprise at the end, all in all a really good read