Here to Stay Ch. 05

Not nice

to finish this chapter like you did. I cant wait for the next one :)

Thank

I love these stories. The characters are so real and relatable that you just want to keep reading. Keep up the good work.

oh no:!!!!

Oh no no no no no...u cant leave us hanging like that, honestly to finish on such a cliffhanger is nothing short of cruel !!! post the rest of it soon please, pretty please !:!:

Oh Man

Not a nice end to this chapter. You have to have it come out all right. They need to be together!

OH NO!!!!!

Ok that was a cruel ending. Leaving us hanging that was not nice. BUT what is worse is the fact of no new chapter tonight. Please post soon!

PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I hope that is not the ending of this story. I think that you did a great job with those characters but please think on your readers. You have posted a story every day and now it is been two days and nothing. Please reunite them so we can have a loving ending like in every fairytale.

Once again, keep the good work up and I wish you all the courage and inspirations needed for this story.

cool

the story is really good enthralling and sweet. all the right combination

Nice story!!

I usually just read and forget the stories. But I can't leave this story without writing a comment. This is a beautiful romantic story and I loved reading it. Thanx.

Oooommmmggggggggg

This always happens!

Someone just has to get run over by a car. Yea sure make it the blind guy. Sorry not insulting you, it's just typical, but so far this is a really good story!

Gavin is a self righteous bastard! So Em pulls on his towel and Gavin basically pulls away from him because that's what his ex did? Yet he accuses Em of pulling away? Double standards if you ask me. Should have been Gavin that was hit by the car.

Cassidy is a blabber mouth

Oh My

Not a nice way to end the chapter,, :(