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Not So Sleeping Beauty Ch. 01

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by Anonymous11/07/08

Like I imagine a 70s Dutch porno script,

Princess Joy with huge tits? Either go for a better storyline or even less plot and go for just sex. I thought your writing was OK except for the olde worlde bits, which were poor. -- UK CYNIC.

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