All Comments on 'Not So Sleeping Beauty Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Like I imagine a 70s Dutch porno script,

Princess Joy with huge tits? Either go for a better storyline or even less plot and go for just sex. I thought your writing was OK except for the olde worlde bits, which were poor. -- UK CYNIC.

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