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yay
I'm so glad ur back, i loved this new addition, can't wait for the next chapter
:)
ps hope u and the baby r doing gud
Good work Ada
You're almost a season writer now. Any thoughts of getting your work publish?
Welcome back!!
I'm so happy to see you back here!
As always, I love your work! So good! I love this couple!
Hope you and baby are doing well!
And, I hope to see you back here soon!
Love it!
Love it! More please! Thanks!
welcum bak!!!
u were missed i mean there wernt too many stories that ket me going. cannot wait for more thank you love the story but i dont want them to split. hope ur getting at better grips being a mother
Welcome back
And wow, what a chapter to return with! Sizzling! Hope you and the baby are doing well.
Fantastic that you are back
Great to have you back. What an exceptional effort to be able to write and care for a baby. I hope that all is going well.
I love these characters - looking forward to their conclusion.
HOLY CR@P!
OMG OMG OMG you wrote the next chapter! lol! i havent even read it yet but i wanted to coment straight away! i thought you left this story for dead! i'm gonna go read all the chapters again. lol, good work.
PLEASE!!!
I really want to read more about these two!!!! Please continue
more Please!!!
Please finish this series!!! I've found it absolutely wonderful, and love the interaction between the two characters! Wonderful job!!!!
Pissed off!!!
There is nothing that irks me more that an awesome story left unfinished...there should be a rule about that. Cause a reader gets into the story Just to be left hanging. and by the time the stroy does get updated (If it gets updated) the reader has to start all over again. I dont know about anyone else but the stories are never the same to second time around, you loose something cause theres no unknown anticipation, you know wahts going to happen so you speed through it...
So Ada this is nothing against your writing, just in the past week I have come across a few really good stories only to be left hanging at the end and am really dissapointed.
Cheers!
I have to agree with Frackelz
Ada Stuart, please understand that this comment has nothing to do with your writing. You are a good writer. And I do understand how having a new baby impacts your writing time or for that matter impacts any spare time you may have. And, I thank you for posting about the new baby in your profile. I wish other writers would post that they may have limited time to write or that they have quit writing completely.
Frackelz is right about how many stories have been left unfinished. Just in the last few months I have read at least a dozen (or more) recently posted stories that have been left unfinished (at ch.2 or at ch.3) for weeks and in some cases are now going on months.
Add in a fair number of series stories that have been left apparently abandoned over the last year and opening/reading a story with a chapter xx designation has become a game of chance to read a finished story.
I have gotten to the point of reading the last posted chapter first before I bother reading chapter 1. It takes away the suspense but at least that way I know the story is finished.
Also now, when I see a newly posted chapter 1 story, I am reluctant to start reading the story because there may not ever be a chapter 2 or chapter xx to end the story. And odds are that because I may have decided not to read the new chapter 1 story, I will then not be looking for the follow-on chapters when they are eventually posted.
And even if I have read chapter 1, I may not be interested in having to re-read chapter 1 in order to refresh my memory before reading chapter 2 because the writer left the story hanging for several weeks or months before they posted the follow-on chapter.
I know there is not much we can do about it.
omg....
please keep going with this story I absolutely love it, its so hot. You are wonderful at creating believable characters and creating depth. I'm in agony!
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