All Comments on '50th Birthday Present Ch. 01'

I do not understand the reasoning behind the way most of the stories start off with the women having massive DD breasts with the perfect ass, willing to do Anything , ANY time. I fully understand that this is fiction and is supposed to be titillating , BUT it would also be nice to see women portrayed closer to what NORMAL women really do look like.Some people may like it, some my not, but opinions are like assholes, Everybody has one , and this is mine. Understand this opinion is NOT directed toward this author.

I am fairly new to this site, so far I have read a dozen or so stories. Nothing has disappointed me more than the repetitiveness of 90% of them. I have yet to find one good story that will make up for ten awful ones. I do hope that this stories beginning will lead on to something with a more professional touch.

sounds just like the way I wished for on my 50th!!!!!!!!!!

My Buddy and I 69ed on my 50th and sucked it all, was great,,,still do it a lot love the cum.tasted so great