Different from what I'm used to reading on here. Would be cool if you added more to those and let those 2 get together again....
Quite a nice story. A bit frustrating, as they head off in their separate ways, but hey, there must have been a reason they broke up before, right?
Would be nice to read a sequel, but this is a decent stand alone story. Maybe going forward the two friend hook up with each other...
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