All Comments on 'Next Time Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
so hot and sexy

Hon that is so hot . Just thinking about being Maria out on a double date with a sexy woman rimming her ass mmmmmmmmmmmm. I cant wait to see what happens next, i know it will be hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
You've Got It!

You certainly have what it takes to be a great writer of this genre of erotica! Clean crisp writing and a nice blend of sex and character development. Keep up the good work!

GerriSCDGerriSCDover 15 years ago
Hot Story

Hi.. I love your story.. I wish it was my biography you were writing. Now for chapter 3..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Just what I want to be !!

Your story is exactly what I want to be. I want to have someone help me dress up as a beautiful woman and teach me how to please my man. I love sucking cock and I want to be fucked so bad while wearing my sexy panties and nylons. Looking forward to more of your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Horny Reader

I loved the story and only wish that I could experience a similar situation. There is nothing nicer than swallowing a man's cum after a nice dinner

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I am 52 years old. I enjoy writing D/s related material from the submissive point of view. This is my first shot at writing erotica, but hope to hone my skills as I continue. I live in Arizona, but travel throughout the west, mostly to Denver, SLC, Vegas, Seattle, Portland ...

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