All Comments on 'Helping Tom Out'

I am glad she didn't find he was Hung like a horse, etc and that she doesn't have 42DD tits.

Just two cousins exploring each other in a time of mutual need.

I like he story, and the charachters. The problem I had really came from the beggining. I felt the story was harder to follow and not always clear. That being said, the mid section of your story is the best. Flesh that out. Rather then just giving us narration of what happened prior, I'd like a little more pre-sexual narrative between the two cousins, not just you telling us the way things were, but show us.