All Comments on 'Owner's Manual'

nice start to what could be a very entertaining series. lots of threads. maybe explain what was up with take over and his ownership. keep it up, i'll be reading

Aaaand of course the first comment on this story is by the Commissar of the People's Republic of Egalitaria who harshes on any maledom/femsub story. It's worth ignoring such people as we, masters and slavegils alike, savor our fulfillment for our own reasons. That we do this to spite _them_ is just the cherry on top of maledom/femsub's ice cream sundae!

Now, as for the story, it is an excellent beginning, and I for one look forward to more.

but with the changes from her narative to an unknown narator and the lack of background information I was left with, WTF? You hint at why she is there, but no real information. We get nothing that would have me care what happens to her, or what he does.

I recommend an editor and some effort to make the reader GAS (Give A Shit).

Will you ever add another chapter loved the story need more

Curious