by olderbroad
I can see why you did what you did. I can even to a certain extent understand your husband letting you do this. If as you say this is your life story, good luck with it. your husband must be a very tolerant person to allow you do such things. I hope you know what you have in him. You do sound an honest person, I too am an honest person, much to most peoples annoyence. So anyway your writing is good, you got your point across, the story for most people probably was erotic, but to a jaded person like myself the description of the the sex was okay, just MY personal opinion nothing more. Good luck with your life story and your stories.
Very nice first effort. Very believable without too much graphic sex. Hope you keep submitting.