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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/03/08

I think that 2,000 or so of the previous

4,800 versions of this story were better

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by Anonymous11/07/08

Poor

Not my cup of tea, sorry

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by Anonymous11/09/08

A Little more

I like the base of your story but I think if you had felt it more then you would have been able to flesh it out with more detail. This is almost like you wrote the basic story and didn't add the rest.
I've read some of your other posts and they are good. Keep trying - I think you'll get there.

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