Nice easy going style. Semi-serious. I liked it and would have given it more marks had it been longer.
A tad short for a story, shame really, other than that a good read.
I do like your stories and would love to see them longer. I particularly like that you're generally writing about large-breasted/larger women. They come across as more real that way and, fortuitously, I like women like that. :) Keep up the good work.
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Nice But Short
Nice easy going style. Semi-serious. I liked it and would have given it more marks had it been longer.
Short.
A tad short for a story, shame really, other than that a good read.
I agree--longer, please?
I do like your stories and would love to see them longer. I particularly like that you're generally writing about large-breasted/larger women. They come across as more real that way and, fortuitously, I like women like that. :)
Keep up the good work.
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