Well, the storyline had a chance to be fairly good (at worst), but got lost in the "only in your wet dream" aspect. And that's not to mention the completely implausible elements, such as grape-flavored whiskey which was added to her water bottle (after it was completely emptied!) and still was expected to taste like water. The story could have been good, but wasn't.
-- KK in Texas
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Anonymous11/14/08
I totally agree...
Grape flavored, clear, whiskey that tastes like water. Riiiiiiight.
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Anonymous11/14/08
maybe
Well, to play devil's advocate, she did say in the course of the story that he didn't have to get her drunk to have her. Perhaps she was just letting him get her drunk.
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Anonymous11/14/08
Uhm
Has anyone ever heard of flavored water? Lol, might not say that, maybe the author had forgotten to say it? There are tons of stories on this site that leave so many details out.
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Anonymous11/15/08
Not that bad
Wasn't the worst story ever. Had some hot parts to it. The author could have added a few details.
Nice quick story.
English
potential, lost.
Well, the storyline had a chance to be fairly good (at worst), but got lost in the "only in your wet dream" aspect. And that's not to mention the completely implausible elements, such as grape-flavored whiskey which was added to her water bottle (after it was completely emptied!) and still was expected to taste like water. The story could have been good, but wasn't.
-- KK in Texas
I totally agree...
Grape flavored, clear, whiskey that tastes like water. Riiiiiiight.
maybe
Well, to play devil's advocate, she did say in the course of the story that he didn't have to get her drunk to have her. Perhaps she was just letting him get her drunk.
Uhm
Has anyone ever heard of flavored water? Lol, might not say that, maybe the author had forgotten to say it? There are tons of stories on this site that leave so many details out.
Not that bad
Wasn't the worst story ever. Had some hot parts to it. The author could have added a few details.
Nice quick story.
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