All Comments on 'The Hacker Ch. 04'

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digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 15 years ago
Every inventors dream,better than a mouse trap

I have really enjoyed this series, and I'm impressed by some of the inventions that Steve has come up with.

A fuck machine is always a great invention to think about , especially if you can make the machine do the work better than a human.

After all, isn't that what progress is all about? Thanks for the good chapters....Rich

ellyneiellyneiover 15 years ago
still loving it

thanks for a great series, hope you will keep it up :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Wow.

Incredible ingenuity.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

And as a techno geek...He will make her Scream!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
wow

loved this so much, it would be great if you wrote another chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Illustrations?

You should so include some illustrations, because it seems you've mapped out some already.. (: Very well written- (as in ideas, mental pictures, and emotions between the characters)(grammer i did not pay attention to)I read every word. Definitely have some romancing of reader going on. Smitten. Completely smitten. I hope there's more..

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Thanks ...

Great series ... more?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Wonderful

really enjoyed this series , i sooooo wish there was more .

looked @ your profile , all posted over 5 weeks in 2008 .

i guess we are all going to be disapointed that the story does not continue.

here's hoping lots of pple send u feedback & you still have the email active.

thats proly the only way we will ever see more of steve & cindy .plus the stunning inventiveness & beauty contained within.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
impressive

Most unique story I've read yet. Brilliant, I loved it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Intense

This is the most interesting story I have read in LONG TIME

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
The Best

Awesome, awesome, awesome. Hope you continue!

maddictmaddictover 7 years ago
One fix.

Something needs to be done with the drop, talk about ruining a perfect evening. A chace to be the hero, oh clever. She certainly was impressed, was it your part or all the machines part ?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
MMmmm More Please!

More More More! Give me more Please!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Aaaannnd???

Me thinks thee needs a muse, or hast thou exited this domain entirely?

This story line has me stiff! Isn't there any more coming? It is a wonderful idea, the mad inventor meets nymphomaniac... please write more!

DiaperboyMiDiaperboyMiabout 3 years ago

Awesome story!!!!!! We definitely need more of this. Please!!!!!!

NymphoManSlutNymphoManSlutover 2 years ago

This story is so much like me it's crazy. My wife just looks at me and she has this dreamy look in her eyes and she just melts and says I love you when I make her a new machine. She names the machines neutral man slur we're up to number 17

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