by ingarlm
I really love your writing. You've described perfectly the mixed emotions of the first time meeting and anxity of self that one expirences when embarking upon a relationship with someone new. I love how you've captured the evolving relationship from crush to full blown love. Absolutely excellent. Keep writing.
~EnchantedGreen~
You have a wonderful writing style and you know how to tell a love story. So please keep writing and submitting stories. We will keep reading them!! Great job...
I have loved your other stories and love this series as well. Please continue to write gay romance stories as they truly are beautiful! You are a spectacular writer and are fast becoming one of my favorite authors!!!
for your beautiful story. It was wonderful following Simon and Greg into their new life together. You have captured their feelings and emotions perfectly and I could practically feel their love for each other grow. I'm kind of sad that there won't be more chapters about them...please, change your mind :) I'm now off to read your other stories. I hope you keep on writing.
IT'S SO TOUCHED. GOOD WORK I LOVE IT BUT CH(5) TO SHORT. JUST WAITING FO MORE
I hope you keep writing! I just finished this story and I'm about to start reading about their neighbors. I loved the build up and both points of view. You are one of my favorite authors now. Thanks for the great story.
I loved the whole story, I was literally rolling on the floor laughing about some of the stuff these two were doing. I'm a straight female and I realize that all couples go through the same stuff regardless of sexual orientation but this story just illustrated it so perfectly. Loved every minute of it.
LOL!!! The way their family and friends were matchmaking was hilarious!!! Hate it when my family threatens to set me up but love this story!!!! Being straight female is so hard sometimes!! Sigh! Wish to find a man at the very least half as romantic as either of them!!!!!!!!! Keep writing your Great!!!!!!!!
Blazing hot juicy lovemaking caps off this magnificent romance. Simon and Greg have built their love brick by brick, suppressing lustful desire until they can both be positive it is love, and not simply animal rutting. Thought by thought and feeling by feeling they learn to KNOW each other before they take the carnal (and, in this case, exhausting) leap. This may well, I hope, be a permanent and constantly joyous union, two souls in one. And the sex, by the way, is terrific! I LOVE THIS STORY!
I think i've read this fifty times...at least. and i'll prob. read it again because it's just too good to be true. i love your stories :D
I can't believe what a talented writer you are! This is my favourite kind of story, and I know I have to read the rest of the stories you've written. And then read them again. Fantastic job!
Every time I read this, it's like the first time. I am a woman, and I have masturbated to this a LOT. You have a talent for romance/smut, and I absolutely LOVE this and every other story you've written. Keep it up!
I loved this story!! The sex was hot, but I really enjoyed the romance.
This is the first story I have read. I can't wait to read more...
Almost perfect lovestory, very romantic as well as erotic. Only two things marred the perfection: shower should have been before 69, and why did you end this last chapter too early, before you described their final lovemaking.
I was smiling all through it. My only difficult was lack of names within sections. With so much 'I' and 'he' I sometimes lost track of POV.
Now I really wish I lived in England. What beautiful men you have in your country. And your story is as beautiful and sexy as the men. Thank you for another lovely story. C.
You definitely built up the tension with this story!!! It was an excellent story. Well written, paced great, wonderful subject matter, and the "will they, won't they figure it out before too late" aspect in the beginning really ups the tension. Great job. Can't wait to read more of your stories!
Excellent story. I think the resder gets as frustrated as the characters waiting for themt to finally sleep together lol But it was a sweet story.
You are my favourite author on this site. I fell in ♥ with a changed life and now thi story too. love these stories where the buildup and characters are so well written in a happy story. Hope you continue writing like this :)
I absolutely love the slow build up you do with your characters, even though it’s frustrating lol! This story was sweet, romantic, and sexy as hell. You’re an amazing writer. Keep writing please!