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by Anonymous

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by WickedEve11/03/08

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This is lovely little poem -- once "I" mentally removed the quotation marks.

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by 11/03/08

Nice Metaphor

This poem is mentioned in today's New Poem Review in the Poetry Feedback & Discussion forum. Thanks for the read.

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by KillerRomance11/04/08

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I have to admit it took me a while to decipher the meaning behind the poem. When I did, I went "Ohhh." It was a lovely read, thank you.

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by lobomao11/08/08

) blessed be

such rich shroudy songs you spin
always I love the reading
savoring them on my lips
As suculent winter fruit
deliciuos delightful delerious
just the way I like you :)

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