All Comments on 'Wimp Loses to Young Black Boss Ch. 03'

Just kill your self and get it over with, really pathic.

Some people just abuse power with the position they hold in life. The characters are developed nicely by the author and this gives a real feeling of knowing each individual. Thanks for sharing this interesting story.

Pathetic RACIST bullshit.

Geez, what a pile of dog shit.

you should kill the black dude before you kill yourself since hes a sack of shit too.

"Do this boy...do that boy...get this boy...get that boy"...

"Uhhhhh....Y...Y...Y...Yes...S...S...Sir"....

This is so bad...I mean really bad...this is the worst...

Just have the white male lead walk off into the surf and drown himself in the first paragraph of chapter 4 and lets move on...

This is just soooooooo bad.......so really bad........

Please put all of us out of your misery, just kill yourself.

Your story comes across as though written by a White hating Black man, or should I say African American, can't call you Black that would be humiliating.

I suggest you read 'Once you go..' by dangerouslydead Mr I'm -Black-with-a-big-cock

If only in a symbolic way, this is a fairly accurate telling of the white man's life in America in the 21st century.

Gatta be gay, just put your stories there and leave the fictional wife out. You go girl.

can't wait to read the next installments.

This story is really well written. The writer really brings the characters along well, to the point the reader can almost feel the main character's humiliation. Can't wait for the last chapter.

Man, I see the prude, homophobic, nearly illiterate racists around here are as bad as ever. If any one of you had the slightest bit of courage to back up your poorly misspelled death threats, you'd post under a user account name instead on "Anonymous". Pussies.

About this chapter, you devoted way more time to character development than I ever expected. Some times that slows things down too much for me, but the sexual tension was so constantly present and tangible that I didn't mind at all. It makes the action later so much more satisfying.

Oh, and since the author calls himself "wimp husband", well, I strongly doubt he's writing this from the black guy's perspective. Idiots. It must take such a tiny mind to confuse "submissive" with "gay". Narrow minded hateful little insects.

This disgusting gibberish is so inherently racist. Is 'dis what you meant?

The story was okay until this chapter and the last one, since guys don't wear bikinis, since bikinis are two piece swimsuits for women, so you probably mean a speedo, the other issues are the fact the husband has no backbone that it's honestly embarrassing, like dude ya need to stand up for yourself, the fact the husband is the cliche unable to last longer than 10 minutes in bed, like you should try to at least get better as well as roleplay with the wife, the fact the husband is supposed to be a romantic guy, yet refuses to try new things in bed, the fact a vein was showing in the black man's speedo when he wasn't hard, sorry but a vein can't be visible unless a man is hard due to the blood flow making the vein pop and why do so many details change by the next sentence? Overall, there is no way this story is true, since it's just not a very well done story.

Haha, poor Myron ... it's obvious where this is going :)