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Fuck Dude
Just kill your self and get it over with, really pathic.
Power
Some people just abuse power with the position they hold in life. The characters are developed nicely by the author and this gives a real feeling of knowing each individual. Thanks for sharing this interesting story.
I second the KIll yourself.
Pathetic RACIST bullshit.
It is unanimous - kill yourself
Geez, what a pile of dog shit.
sack of crap
you should kill the black dude before you kill yourself since hes a sack of shit too.
Such a strange world.
"Do this boy...do that boy...get this boy...get that boy"...
"Uhhhhh....Y...Y...Y...Yes...S...S...Si r"....
This is so bad...I mean really bad...this is the worst...
Just have the white male lead walk off into the surf and drown himself in the first paragraph of chapter 4 and lets move on...
This is just soooooooo bad.......so really bad........
Die Please
Please put all of us out of your misery, just kill yourself.
Your story comes across as though written by a White hating Black man, or should I say African American, can't call you Black that would be humiliating.
I suggest you read 'Once you go..' by dangerouslydead Mr I'm -Black-with-a-big-cock
Fairly accurate
If only in a symbolic way, this is a fairly accurate telling of the white man's life in America in the 21st century.
You
Gatta be gay, just put your stories there and leave the fictional wife out. You go girl.
very hot
can't wait to read the next installments.
well wrote story!
This story is really well written. The writer really brings the characters along well, to the point the reader can almost feel the main character's humiliation. Can't wait for the last chapter.
The Comments of Hateful Pussies
Man, I see the prude, homophobic, nearly illiterate racists around here are as bad as ever. If any one of you had the slightest bit of courage to back up your poorly misspelled death threats, you'd post under a user account name instead on "Anonymous". Pussies.
About this chapter, you devoted way more time to character development than I ever expected. Some times that slows things down too much for me, but the sexual tension was so constantly present and tangible that I didn't mind at all. It makes the action later so much more satisfying.
Oh, and since the author calls himself "wimp husband", well, I strongly doubt he's writing this from the black guy's perspective. Idiots. It must take such a tiny mind to confuse "submissive" with "gay". Narrow minded hateful little insects.
Racist drivel
This disgusting gibberish is so inherently racist. Is 'dis what you meant?
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