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America's Playboy Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/07/08

crap

crap crap crap crap

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by Anonymous11/07/08

Ditto

Amazing two pieces of crap in a day.

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by Anonymous11/09/08

love the humour

I am going to read all of these chapters. If the rest are like the first I am in for a treat. You are always entertaining fictionwriter. I quess you write what you know.You must of grown up in an italian neighborhood. Hey, I just love your stuff. Keep on writing!Dialogue is surely your thing.

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by gperry284302/08/13

Good start,

The story is developing nicely can't wait to read more.

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