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At the Bank Ch. 01

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by Anonymous11/07/08

More Please!!!

Great start. I would like to see the characters developed a little more. We already know he's lusted after her for a long time. How about her? Why did she do it? Where else did they secretly meet? You could do alot with this story. Please add more chapters. :) kim in usa

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