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America's Playboy Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous11/07/08

BORING

Boring! this isn't a mafia site! where's the erotica?

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by Anonymous11/07/08

more crap

stop fucking whining about people voting down your stories - write better stories!!!

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by gperry284302/08/13

I think you're doing just fine.

Let's see so far you have spent two short Literotica pages cleanly, cleverly and interestingly setting the stage in a new story. What are these other two commenters pissing about. It must be they have spent fifteen minutes and haven't got off yet and exhausted their short attention span. I can see how that would be traumatic for some. Keep up the good work.

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