All Comments on 'The Matter of the Mind Ch. 01'

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C_frommnC_frommnabout 8 years ago
Nice Start

Like the Idea of the Device looking like a cell phone. But i can see problems if one of the wives friend grabs it to make a Call and ends up being trained.

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I have been criticized by some individuals with no name for my darker side of my stories, honestly constructive criticism is far better than assuming one’s character is not well received - you have not lived in my head, body or soul, you have not walked a mile, yard, foot , or...

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