All Comments on 'Rejuvenation'

This is a great story, but one that the reader must read carefully, so as not to miss some of the key points.When I first read the story, I missed the paragraph where she came out of the bathroom and spotted him in the shadows.Without that key bit of information, one could take a loving husband for a voyeur or even a rapist. That changed the whole intent of the story, and made little sense to me. I reread the whole story, and then picked up the single bit of information that set the whole story to a loving husband trying to please his wife.

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I know that my haste is a shortcoming of mine, and that it causes me to sometimes miss a good bit of the story.I will give up on a story if the author doesn't set-up the scenes to where the reader doesn't have to think a lot to understand what is written. I read documentation files when I work, so when I read for pleasure , I don't usually like to think a whole lot.

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With the above said, I do want to say, that when I gave the story a second read, it was well worth the time, and I enjoyed what the author had intent to say. Thanks for the story,and the effort it takes to get it posted on the net...Rich