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A Curse on Them All

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by Anonymous

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by PrincessErin11/09/08

Touching

Very personal and powerful poem.

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by WickedEve11/11/08

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Safe Bet, you're playing it safe with this poem. Sure, it's poetic with Pan's pipes, but you need to get real. I know you have strong emotions when it comes to this subject. Write a truly powerful poem by showing the reader how "you" really feel. How does it affects your life? What do you think when you look at your lover? etc...

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by tazz31706/09/12

THE ANGER TOWARDS THE INNOCENTS

effects us all. TK U MLJ LV NV

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