by JordanGrey
loved it... nice balance and tempo... good storyline... thanks... now more
I enjoyed this thoroughly. But more, perhaps? Would love to see these two at it again! <3 Lillian, KR.
Well done! Great story and extremely well written. Loved the content, style and pace. The character is someone I can really relate to. Keep up the good work.
As a workout fanatic, I can totally relate to the fantasy and while the outcome was not unsuprising, it was still completely enjoyable.
This story brought that word to my lips as I reached the blistering climax with our main character. The tempo of the action was virtually without a breath, and the choice of words powerful as from beginning to end, it was like a bullet in flight to its target. If you like hot, frenzied orgasmic writing this is it!! Just wonderful!!
May there be many more like it!
This author is indeed a welcome addition to Literotica. This first, well written effort makes me wish for more such postings. Soon I hope.
For the first story by an author new to Litreotica it is great. I find the style easy to read and very engaging. I hope there is a lot more to come - soon.
I've had an experience very much like this in the past... brought a lot of memories back :) Thanks for the great story!