All Comments on 'Owner's Manual Ch. 05'

This was simply poorly done. Master was a complete dolt. Not a single likeable character in this mess.

Please continue I need more

I've read some horror stories on this site, but this is the sickest one by far. The first installment turned my stomach, but I kept reading. I knew it would get better. It didn't; each successive chapter was worse. Two paragraphs into this last offering, I gave up.

** shemar

for the deviant minded i feel that this story is very well done..of course this is all the work of fantasy and when one reads from thier mind lets say it can not be as real as if it has happened in actual life,,perhaps this story has not reached some peoples dark side.yes ok forced lesbian incest is not every ones cup of juice and i understand that..but to a reader of extreme bdsm erotica there are no bares held..and perosnally i feel that this story hits the mark,,i tried to contact you thirdcoast in the hopes that you would finish the story,keep in mind that there are only 3 people who commented ,,2 against and 2 for it,,now its a tie lol..but if you are not finishing the story because of what people might feel ,,dont,,this is your idea,and i think it should be finished if you have the chance..i wrote to you in the hopes that if you were not planning on ending the story,that you would grant me the rights to do it for you..i began writing horror and police action until i started writing erotica with the same zeal as my horror,,with equal attention to detail..i have written erotica (in my case a mother willingly being a sexual toy for her twin daughters) that is so exceptionally hardcore..that somehow i doubt it would be accepted on literotica..but i ask that you allow me to finish owners manual if you do not,,but then again i doubt that youll even see my comment because its been so long since youve been on but im hoping

White-hot, beyond erotic, totally kinky. Extremely arousing. A fantastic fantasy, true perversion.

can hardly wait fo the next chapter love your erotic storys,

what a very hot/horny bdsm story i love it,when are we getting more chaperts please,thank you.

a very hotter and horhy incestous between mother and her sexy daugthers slaves ,i love your great storys when will there be other chapters please.

When does MASTER take all three in their ass?

Very hot story. Look forward to seeing mother and big-titted daughter in action together with the men on the boat.

Very hot and kinky. I am looking forward to mother and daughters servicing the guests. Maura should get her tits enhanced soon and the daughter’ nipples pierced.

“He smiled and patted both of heads, telling us that we were to go and clean up and prepare ourselves, Lei Lei, Maura and myself, as someone special was coming to visit us.”

The mother loves that her daughters are sex slaves with her. Very hot.

Could be a good story if you didn't rush it and have so many grammatical errors. Missing words and letters in words reduce this story to 3 stars at best.

i love your story about the mother and her two submissive daughter as sexy sex slaves to their master and the words cunt,i wish their were more chapters to read thank you .