A well written piece although I'm a teacher and use the original story in my class sometimes. You have me traumatized though. I will now think of sex when I read that story :)
lordchilworth is right: most stories at Literotica are far more erotic than literate. Weaving literacy, eroticism, and humor into a single short story is indeed a rare talent and a rare gift to Lit's readers!
I know how hard this is to do, and I appreciate your masterful writing. After reading one contest entry after another that is nothing more thsn a stroke story, this tale is so welcome! Bravo to you!!!!
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a rare talent
thank you for the unexpected gift of literature at literotica
Great
A well written piece although I'm a teacher and use the original story in my class sometimes. You have me traumatized though. I will now think of sex when I read that story :)
Classic
May he turn over in his grave; this is wonderful.
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What a lovely twist on the original. Loved it
One in Four Million!
lordchilworth is right: most stories at Literotica are far more erotic than literate. Weaving literacy, eroticism, and humor into a single short story is indeed a rare talent and a rare gift to Lit's readers!
Way better than frankincense & myrrh
The Winter Holiday Contest has a winner. Thank you for the early Xmas present.
Pretty amazing....
I know how hard this is to do, and I appreciate your masterful writing. After reading one contest entry after another that is nothing more thsn a stroke story, this tale is so welcome! Bravo to you!!!!
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