Test Subjects

Absurd?

You used the word absurd in your story, which I must say pretty much describes the whole thing. But I have to admit I kind of liked it. If you write future chapters I'll have to read them just to see where you take it. I like the possibilities.

that was good!

Clever and witty, I enjoyed it very much. Especially the end..."Boy, I never liked you very much...."

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Is there going to be a second chapter?

Where's part two ?! I've been waiting since this one came out for part two.

Nice Start

But you leave open the Idea that there will be more. Come on he has his wife and Niece not to mention others he could bring to the Harem. Like the Deans wife or Daughter?

Another

So want to see part 2.

please write more

please continue your story so much potential for humiliation or weird requests to the 2 altered women, so exciting...

Please you must continue!

The last anonymous comment is also me... I really like your story you should continue it !