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Wow you cheated with your friends wife.
Your friends wife is a slut. Your wife's friend is a slut. Your wife and slut put on a show drunk at a dance club for an old boyfriend, hmmmm. What do you bet your wife and the slut fucked the friend and you got sloppy seconds? Let me see the mentality here. The guys play poker in each others homes so the ladies, married of course, get to dress sexy, go to night clubs to dance with men and get drunk. Do you see equality here? I dont, I see a bunch of dumb ass husbands getting cheated on by manipulating exwives. Sorry ladies out dancing and drinking is just another excuse for fucking around, get a brain it will eventually happen no matter how much you trust her.
nice to see
another author with no qualms who creates a bunch of shithead carachters but I guess you have to be like that otherwise you couldn't be a swinger right? thats those who also give a shit about marriages and kids or families.
more please
does Jake find out?
Cliched, but well done conclusion
Dani and I have done our fair share of harmless flirting. Dani is attractive. I'd say she is 5'6", 130lbs. Her legs are toned, leading up to a nice tight little ass. Her best feature by far is her lovely 34DD breasts. I wish I could take the credit, but it seems like whenever I see her, her nipples are always hard. Tonight was no exception. My wife Alexis is even more beautiful than Dani (my bias aside). She is 5'9" 145lbs of voluptuous curves. Her best feature is clearly her backside. Thick, slightly toned thighs that lead up to a big, round, soft ass. She is not lacking up top either, sporting a 36D
I would suggest that the author challenge him/herself to describe the women without resorting to vital statistics. Saying that a woman wears a DD cup, other than saying obliquely that she’ll need a boob job in a few years, is no more than painting by the numbers if what you are trying to communicate is that she is truly voluptuous.
You always hear the stories about how erotic the site of two women kissing is, but until you see it in person, you don't understand
These are a couple of the oldest, and most shopworn, clichés found in erotic writing: two women, heretofore heterosexual, will enthusiastically participate in uninhibited same sex activities giving the chance, and that the any male (particularly a partner of one one the women) will be intensely aroused.
On a whole, though, the story is a better than average rehash of the usual threesome/lesbian/adultery line because (1)for once it is narrated by some one other than the guy whose wife is being fucked while he watches, and (2) the encounter is engineered by the wife..
And the twist at the end – I liked it that the cuckolded husband wasn’t watching, or the narrator’s wife didn’t announce that she and Dani were spending next Saturday night in Jake’s bed – he (the narrator) wasn’t invited except to watch, or any number of such ploys that would restore the universe to balance (the husband gets cuckolded, but the good news is he likes it) It was the best sort of ending: maybe the story hasn’t ended – maybe there will be another Ladies Night, maybe next time … well, who knows?
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