That has got to be one of the most erotic things I've ever read. The emotion, the dialogue; it was all so engaging and the sex was just as rousing as the buildup. I'm so glad I stumbled onto this. Thank you!
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Anonymous11/29/08
Oh wow!
That was excellent!
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Anonymous06/23/10
Sigh....
While the male domination 'does it' for me more, this was incredibly hot. I'm beginning to think that anything you write is erotic.....
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Anonymous02/10/11
Nice, very nice
I disagree I think this story is far hotter than your other self-indulgent male domination fantasies.
You should write more female dominated tales, its obvious you have a talent for it. Good work
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Anonymous12/28/13
Thank you for this.
Just discovered the wonderful world of BDSM last night. I'm now trying to discover where I belong in this world.
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Anonymous06/12/15
Wowwww....
Honestly doc, this is why you're the best. Every word of this was woven with erotic gold.
English
Loved it
Please continue; I'd love to see where you'd take it
Good God...
That has got to be one of the most erotic things I've ever read. The emotion, the dialogue; it was all so engaging and the sex was just as rousing as the buildup. I'm so glad I stumbled onto this. Thank you!
Oh wow!
That was excellent!
Sigh....
While the male domination 'does it' for me more, this was incredibly hot. I'm beginning to think that anything you write is erotic.....
Nice, very nice
I disagree I think this story is far hotter than your other self-indulgent male domination fantasies.
You should write more female dominated tales, its obvious you have a talent for it. Good work
Thank you for this.
Just discovered the wonderful world of BDSM last night. I'm now trying to discover where I belong in this world.
Wowwww....
Honestly doc, this is why you're the best. Every word of this was woven with erotic gold.
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