All Comments on 'Under The Right Moon Ch. 01'

You made me smile! Hot very hot and looking forward to more very hot chapters!

More, more, more!!

Having read it, I actually went looking for the next chapters. Where are they?

This is great, please continue

One of the best beginer stories I have seen on here in a very long time, I was hooked in the first paragphs and you did not dissapoint in the least. I absolutely loved the ending and am sooo looking forward to the next chapter.

Wow...very hot. I really enjoyed this chapter, so please update soon.

Wrong category, but very nice. I see potential for follow-up chapters, but it they're not already in your head (as the author), then don't push it. Good work!

-- KK in Texas

great writing, wonderful story and very hot. I look forward to more!

i like this story!!! please post again...like right now...lol!!!!

Love where you've taken us so far and hope that you continue with the story. Keep it up and please update soon.

Thank you for submitting this story, it was a great pleasure reading it! :)

I hope we won't have to wait too long for the next part(s)...

Greetings from Germany

I really love the witty, playful way the characters interacted. Not every story I read makes me laugh out loud. Or makes me as hot as this did! Excellent writing!

When do we get the next installment?

Excellent story. Keep up the wonderful work.

That last line was funny. Good read, thanks!