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Love It!
You made me smile! Hot very hot and looking forward to more very hot chapters!
unseelie, eh? :-D
More, more, more!!
Having read it, I actually went looking for the next chapters. Where are they?
Great!!!!
This is great, please continue
That was Frickin great
One of the best beginer stories I have seen on here in a very long time, I was hooked in the first paragphs and you did not dissapoint in the least. I absolutely loved the ending and am sooo looking forward to the next chapter.
Very Hot!
Wow...very hot. I really enjoyed this chapter, so please update soon.
Very nice!
Wrong category, but very nice. I see potential for follow-up chapters, but it they're not already in your head (as the author), then don't push it. Good work!
-- KK in Texas
Very hot!
great writing, wonderful story and very hot. I look forward to more!
update soon please.
i like this story!!! please post again...like right now...lol!!!!
Love It!!
Love where you've taken us so far and hope that you continue with the story. Keep it up and please update soon.
I like it very much
Thank you for submitting this story, it was a great pleasure reading it! :)
I hope we won't have to wait too long for the next part(s)...
Greetings from Germany
Love it
I really love the witty, playful way the characters interacted. Not every story I read makes me laugh out loud. Or makes me as hot as this did! Excellent writing!
Absolutely Loved it!
When do we get the next installment?
Wonderful!!
Excellent story. Keep up the wonderful work.
Lol
That last line was funny. Good read, thanks!
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