All Comments on 'The Family Which Plays Together Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
fun read and sexual

keep writing your stories your way.good job.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
What a piece of crap.

Proof read your crap. At least make it readable. I repeat this is a piece of crap.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Loved it.

I loved reading this first chapter & I can't wait to read the rest of this story. Please continue with this story soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great beginning.

I love reading this story, please continue it soon.

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