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by WickedEve11/13/08

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I just love how you took something as simple as thick ankles and made it poetic! :) This poem is mentioned in the review thread.

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by UnderYourSpell11/13/08

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This was a good read and made me smile!

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by Senna Jawa03/09/11

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Sara & Joe quarrelled often
that's what young couples do
each time Sara worried deeply
about the "ankles thing"

To make up
Joe would kiss and massage
Sara's feet and ankles
and she would feel like
she came back from the other side

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