All Comments on 'Inappropriate Dress'

by SexyBlonde218

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lordchilworthlordchilworthover 15 years ago
editing,editing

story shows promise, readability stilted somewhat by gramatical and tensual errata. some of the volunteer editors on this sites' program are wonderful... might i suggest?

gotranegotraneover 15 years ago
What A Start!

Welcome to Literotica! Where have you been? The previous comment may carry some merit, so take it with a grain of salt. Either way, don't stop writing! We need at least a sequel to this first story.

JADED_ONE1969JADED_ONE1969over 15 years ago
Well done story. Very hot!

Good to have you here.

gotranegotranealmost 11 years ago
Bingo!

Something that we've all fantasized about and wanted to be a "fly on the wall" to observe up close! Follow-up, please, at least, if not a series.

Randee2058Randee2058almost 7 years ago
WHAT HAPPENED NEXT

I'm overwhelmed with the story. πŸ’₯πŸ’₯πŸ’₯πŸ’₯πŸ’₯πŸ’₯. 😍😍😍

5🌟's AND A PLEA FOR MORE.

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