by SexyBlonde218
story shows promise, readability stilted somewhat by gramatical and tensual errata. some of the volunteer editors on this sites' program are wonderful... might i suggest?
Welcome to Literotica! Where have you been? The previous comment may carry some merit, so take it with a grain of salt. Either way, don't stop writing! We need at least a sequel to this first story.
Something that we've all fantasized about and wanted to be a "fly on the wall" to observe up close! Follow-up, please, at least, if not a series.
I'm overwhelmed with the story. π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯π₯. πππ
5π's AND A PLEA FOR MORE.