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Continue.

Great start, I really enjoyed reading it. This story needs to be continued, please do so.

so-so

would have been much better with out the orgies and lies almost bad enough for the group or fetish area

Very well done.

I think the beginning of the story is perfect. You've created some wonderful characters and set up a very vivid situation. Well done.

My only criticism is that it seems that when you start talking about the sibling attraction it becomes slightly more base than the rest of the text. Regardless, you write beautifully and should certainly continue. Good job.

Very well done.

I think the beginning of the story is perfect. You've created some wonderful characters and set up a very vivid situation. Well done.

My only criticism is that it seems that when you start talking about the sibling attraction it becomes slightly more base than the rest of the text. Regardless, you write beautifully and should certainly continue. Good job.

Good intro...

NOW PLEASE TELL US THE REST OF THE STORY!

WOW!!

Don't listen to the critics! This is great, a Wonderful Fantasy! Please write more!

where's the rest of it
WE WANT MORE !!!!

sis and bro

too short and sex part where was it ???

Needs part two and make story longer and let the tension build😉