I feel like I am reading a chapter of the Soprano's.
Great stuff and a fabulous read. The boys are funny and typically the mob type. I quess you might know something about that. Love it!
Some other comments on previous chapters described them as crap. After wading through everything, I am inclined to agree with them. This is nothing but a long, dull conversation. Now I'm sory I wasted the time to read it.
The story was a good italian strory-long and ramblin with no finish and only reference to sex. Doesn't belong in Literotica.I likrd the dialogue but this a sex story outlet. This DOES NOTqualify!!
Freddie I may have underestimated your ambition. Now I am starting to think that you are looking to the future toward position on the staff for Godfather Four, Godfather Five and all future episodes. Fun story carry on.
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